Looking for a revision based on feedback. Here is the feedback I have received.
You should use citations in your writing when:
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• you use a direct quote
• you paraphrase
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Great continuation of the RMP. A little more information would enhance the educational opportunity to best prepare the stakeholders to make the best-informed project decisions. The extra details would also have demonstrated a stronger understanding of the risk monitoring process.